You will notice, I wrote down one column and then copied what I wrote down the second. I put a date in the lower right hand corner. Secretaries were urged to do this because it was a record of what they wrote (and easy reference), it's up to you.
Cross outs are mistakes. You can cross out your mistake or for faster taking of dictation, put a line through the outline.
Here's my go at it... for clarity I'll match the words-per-line from your notes.
A day here in the good air will aid her. I cannot hear him well, can can (sic) he hear me? The hat lay there an hour. Her gay air will not go well here. I am going; Emma may go in an hour. Amy hid her hat in the tree. I can go there in a day. Ray will aid her at the hill. I am ill; I cannot go. Are there more going in the dray? I hear Eddie will aid me in Erie in May. Ella will not heat the tea.
Can you clarify why a partial copy of what's written in the left column appears on the right? The date I can understand. Is the repeated text supposed to be some sort of synopsis?
Nice writing. Some of your L characters get a bit close to looking like K characters, but then I have that issue, too. Sometimes I over compensate and my L characters take off down the page.